Thursday, 2 July 2015

Writing punctuation goal term 2

"Hey, did you hear there is a war coming Lemon Lime?"
"Yea ice blocks vs ice creams"
"Better prepare for battle then, since those those ice creams are at it again, all they ever do is cause trouble!"
"Um yea sighed Lemon Lime as he looked out the palace window at the beautiful icy land. You see Lemon Lime is not like Strawberry cream and the rest of the ice blocks in the palace, in fact, Lemon Lime is secretly an ice cream, the most sworn enemy of a talking ice block.



  1. This is a really "cool" piece of writing :)

  2. you did a really funny piece of writing. keep up the good work

  3. your writing was really funny and you used punctuation really well.