Monday, 19 October 2015

Term one writing goal sentence

this is a piece of writing that shows that I can do this goal

''I'm scared Mum" I said
"Don't be silly!" Said mum. "Your a big boy now, you're turning 5 next month, remember?"

"Of course I remember mum!" I said, "So what did you get me?"

"Ok mum" I said as I handed her my astronought helmet.
I looked around the bright blue waiting room. There wasn't many patients today. There was a girl with a broken arm, a boy with a really bad case of the flu, but as usual nobody was here for the same reason I was. To get surgery on my face.

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