Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 27 November 2015

Monday, 19 October 2015

Term one writing goal sentence

this is a piece of writing that shows that I can do this goal


''I'm scared Mum" I said
"Don't be silly!" Said mum. "Your a big boy now, you're turning 5 next month, remember?"

"Of course I remember mum!" I said, "So what did you get me?"

"August!"
"Ok mum" I said as I handed her my astronought helmet.
I looked around the bright blue waiting room. There wasn't many patients today. There was a girl with a broken arm, a boy with a really bad case of the flu, but as usual nobody was here for the same reason I was. To get surgery on my face.